Beautiful Nightmare
I dream of a land
where everything
is safe and sound
where there is not
a noise of yelling
or taunting
where there is no
hunger or war
and the flowers blossom
each time you pass by
where everyone will love you
not by force, but by choice
where the sun still shines
even on your darkest days
and the monster inside of you
becomes a new-born angel
but something slaps me hard
across the face
and I wake up
to reality
I really like the line "and the monster inside of you
ReplyDeletebecomes a new-born angel" Your descriptions are really cool!
I really like how you related your dream back in to the real world, I also love you title it's very creative.
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing poem :). I like how you added a twist to the poem, suddenly turning the dream into the reality
ReplyDeleteI like the way you arranged the lines and stanzas, it's very creative. I can relate to this poem and I really like the meaning behind it.
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