I have styles by Bryze
Doing freestyles everyday,
Makes me feel like a pro.
Making cookies everyday,
Makes me feel happy.
But when someone bullies me,
It makes me cry.
People are so cruel,
I don’t know why,
It doesn’t matter if there are bullies.
What matters is love everyone,
Be fair,
Be caring,
And be loving.
When I see someone helps someone,
My heart goes,
“Boom-Shacka-Lacka.”
I like how you speak out against bullying. It is a topic that is very serious even though not every one sees it that way.
ReplyDeleteI like how this poem is personal, talking about your general lifestyle and being bullied (bullying is a strong topic too). The image at the end is also interesting.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very good. I really liked your image, but it really confused me.
ReplyDeleteI like how you chose your image for the poem it a bit confusing but if you understand it make a lot of scents
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