Wednesday, February 5, 2014

W

W
When Will it stop?
he Wonders as he Walks alone
Why does it happen?
he questions as his head sinks slowly into his hands
What Will it take for someone to step in?
he ponders as his checks are drenched with his own tears
Who Would even Want to help a “loser like him”?
he inquires as his legs finally collapse and his body plummets to the ground
there has to be someone out there
someone to stop the relentless taunting
someone to make the teasing subside
someone to erase all the pain he feels
but Where?
Where is his support?
When Will it come?
Will it ever come?
Why Won’t someone help?
What did he do to deserve their hatred?
Who Will finally put an end to it?
he Will
if no one else Will, he Will
i Wonder
Why can’t We help?
others saw the signs
but no one did anything
When did it get so bad that kids think there is only one Way out?
Why did having no life suddenly become the more plausible option?
but What’s the big deal?
right?

its only harmless fun.







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9 comments:

  1. I love your poem it sent chills down my arms while I read it.

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  2. I love the message of this poem, good job.

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  3. WOW! This is amazing and very true we're always to scared to help and get judged ourselves.

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  4. I like how you depict the central message in this poem. Great job

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  5. It's sad to know that even though we seem to live in a good community, many kids are still asking these questions. You delivered the message beautifully, and even more impressive is your use of "w" in each sentence.

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  6. i love this Emily <3 I always get chills when I read it, and especially when I listen to the voiceover

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  7. I love your poem and your picture is a great image for this poem.

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  8. I think you wrote a very good poem and the ending lines are really good. Good luck in the perfromance.

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  9. I love how you capitalized the W's in your poem, the repetition you did in the poem, and also how you ended you poem

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