Love Is...
Love is like the beach
Brilliant, bright, beautiful
Love is like the depths of the ocean
You never know when or where it is going to end
Love is like the sand
As you step into it you feel it soft,
Comforting and climbing into your toes
Love is like the crashing waves
Pounding down quickly and aggressively
Love is like the the sea shells
You cherish them for their natural beauty
Love is like the colorful fish
Unique, joyful and full of mystery
Love is like the salt water
If you dive in too quickly it can sting
Love is like the lifeguard
Trying to make sure no one gets hurt
Love is like the sun
Warm and radiant
But can burn if you aren’t careful
Love is anything and everything you make of it.
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You poem is really good. I really enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteCool poem. I like the creativity of the poem and how you describe the true meaning of love. For example, the beach is a good representation of love.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of sensory detail. I love the last line, saying how love can be warm and radiant, but burn you if you aren't careful
ReplyDeleteThis poem has a very good sense of detail and scenery. I like the part where you compared it with the beach, one of my favorite places to hang out. I also like your picture with the sea shells shaped like a heart
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